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Thursday, 21 February 2013

Over and Over, again


Wrapped in the veil of unwanted sympathy,
Wallowing in wisps of heartfelt misery.
Ribbons of reasons fading away,
Streaks of options turning grey.
Sneaking in and out for clues,
Dipping in disappointment, afresh
Acclaiming expectation that gnaw on insides.
Beaten down by confronting tries.

-Momina.

18 comments:

  1. That has some very good flow to it and is good. If I had one criticism I would say it feels unfinished.

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    1. Thank you, Mark! :)
      I might finish it, but I like it this way, incomplete.

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  2. Whoa! Even the sadness can be wrapped with such beauty! I think only you can do that!! Hope this power of words will bring magic and turn things on bright side :)

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    1. Oh my!
      Dreamygal, your words and praise mean a lot to me. Thank you so very much! I am honored that you think of my writing this way!

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  3. on the other side of Over and Over, again will there be a refreshing one....

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  4. And yet, standing tall and moving on
    With head held high. :)

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  5. Life itself seems the biggest tragedy sometimes :(
    Been there, still there! Sighs

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    1. It passes, I am not sure when or how but it does. It's cliched for a reason. :)

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  6. Ahh! That's some good writing there. :)

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