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Tuesday, 19 March 2013

Unobstructed



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She stands still in the center of the park, staring somewhere in the distance, unaware of the way people eye her. Half wet hair, blowing in the breeze, the length of her scarf flapping around her neck. Yet, her gaze is intent, unhindered; settled on the single fluffy cloud that adorns the sky, so lost in its beauty that she cannot see the setting that hold my equally committed contemplation. My view is completely different but similarly beautiful. Our unwavering gazes settled upon the sole scenery that connects us. The only difference is that I am the sun, peeking from behind those very clouds.

-Momina.

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    1. Yes! Thank you, Joy, haven't seen you around lately.

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    2. I have not been around :((( But i will catch up with you soon!

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  2. Wow ... your last line is beautiful !!!

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  3. "Our unwavering gazes settled upon the sole scenery that connects us. The only difference is that I am the sun, peeking from behind those very clouds."
    Nothing was ever spoken better in two sentences than this.
    You've grabbed my attention. Exquisite!

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    1. I am glad you liked it! Thank you, Heera. :)

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    1. Regardless, a lot was said without being spoken.

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  5. This is so beautifully done! Your writings are amazing!

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    1. I am honored that you feel so, Raajii.

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  6. Wow.. the last line made me fall in love with your words again and again ! :) Amazing! :)

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    1. Hahah awww, thank you so much! Always a pleasure to know what you think! :)

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  7. Loved loved loved this one......such a beautiful description, amazingly penned!

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    1. Thank you, glad you loved it! :)

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  8. Momina, your words never fail to make me fall in love with them.

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    1. Thank you so much Aqsa, this means a lot.

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