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Monday, 29 July 2013

Obscured




And I waited till the questions evolved into answers, 

Question marks straightened into exclamations. 

Encrypted were the messages

Lost were the hints,

Scribbled and hidden scraps, paper thin.

Dipped in symbols,

To form, incoherent answers.

Master of such creations

Losing while deciphering.

-Momina.

19 comments:

  1. Losing while deciphering.
    I envy you Momina, I wish I could write like you! You're amazing!

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  2. I echo the above comment. You are brilliant.

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    1. Thank you so much! Your appreciation means a lot.

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  3. Sounds like someone is interested in cryptography?

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    1. Not specifically, rather the hidden perspective so often overlooked.

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  4. um i am curious about your architecture result :p

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  5. To gain something you got to loose on some other thing.Almost everything comes with a cost you know.
    I could not wrap around the whole poem and felt that the ending was somewhat disconnected from the rest of the poem.

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    1. The poem is only about how we tend to complicate things ourselves, we ourselves make hurdles for us, a twisted road to finding the answers.
      That was my perspective while writing it. Thank you for sharing yours!

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  6. I read the poem over and over again to enjoy the beauty of every word so beautifully etched in lasting phrases. Your writing is a pleasure to read. ❤✿❤

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  7. And all I will say is, Simply Awesome. No more words needed.

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    1. Thank you, Arcane, for always dropping by! :)

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  8. WHOA :O
    I could actually picture a universe of scribbles forming words. But, those words were still unclear.

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  9. You weave emotions so beautifully in words!

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