tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post1190471073331677343..comments2023-09-06T03:37:06.453-07:00Comments on EVERLASTING WORDS: Crazy Rambling #10Mominahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comBlogger22125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-5139311738557697272013-06-17T08:48:10.466-07:002013-06-17T08:48:10.466-07:00I never think that they are complete, even when th...I never think that they are complete, even when they end! <br />They are still cliff endings, waiting to be thought over!Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-1287695945813770582013-06-15T11:35:52.237-07:002013-06-15T11:35:52.237-07:00I don't why but unfinished stories knaw at me ...I don't why but unfinished stories knaw at me till the very end. I'm just a curious kid I guess. And, not knowing the end kills me inside.<br /><br />By the way, my first thought was 'pressed flowers' as I read through the first paragraph only to find out that you had written about it in the second one :)Lubaina E.https://www.blogger.com/profile/05074289638784974914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-40551035875914237992013-05-30T13:08:14.397-07:002013-05-30T13:08:14.397-07:00That's why they say live in the moment, but we...That's why they say live in the moment, but we are too busy planning the next that we lost that moment! I hope we realize soon that we are running out of time. <br /><br />I hope your rose stays with you, forever bloomed.<br /><br />I am glad you liked it this much, Su! Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-55356586229613065782013-05-24T01:06:16.924-07:002013-05-24T01:06:16.924-07:00We try and hold on to things for ever. And all the...We try and hold on to things for ever. And all the while memories drip like water from cupped hands. We try to preserve what the rose meant to us in between sheets of paper. We get too literal about it. It is a desperate attempt at holding on. We all do it. We all save moments, stop time etc, don't we? One day perhaps we'll come to realise that moments should be enjoyed as you live them and learn to let go once they're over. Perhaps. <br /><br />I love unfinished stories too. But I have this rose that I'm clinging on to, hoping it will revive, hoping furiously that there is an end in sight. <br /><br />Did I mention I loved this piece and you managed to nudge this long a comment out of me? :)Suhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02811983640770318933noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-9563318346258381072013-05-23T23:23:33.044-07:002013-05-23T23:23:33.044-07:00Thank you, Alcina.
Well, I really hope you find t...Thank you, Alcina. <br />Well, I really hope you find them as interesting as I do, unveil the stories within them.Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-42466747725820388262013-05-23T23:22:38.554-07:002013-05-23T23:22:38.554-07:00Thank you so much, Hira! :'D
I love how you t...Thank you so much, Hira! :'D <br />I love how you take your time to tell me exactly what you thought about my pieces!Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-53626170334398668902013-05-23T23:21:44.481-07:002013-05-23T23:21:44.481-07:00Exactly! I find them much more fascinating.Exactly! I find them much more fascinating.Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-16092038765026478732013-05-23T23:19:55.366-07:002013-05-23T23:19:55.366-07:00I am flattered, Me! Thank you so much!I am flattered, Me! Thank you so much!Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-7670002503764954092013-05-23T23:19:25.739-07:002013-05-23T23:19:25.739-07:00That's it, Ph! I am telling you, we are soul s...That's it, Ph! I am telling you, we are soul sisters or sth! <br /><br />I think their stories are unspoken, and it's up to us to hear them out, to write them down. They are the inspiration, the words encased, we are the outlet. <br /><br />If we start giving out attention to all these interesting things that has an unseen charm to them, life would be better.<br /><br />Thank you, so much!Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-46273519619313472212013-05-23T23:16:18.579-07:002013-05-23T23:16:18.579-07:00Exactly, I like the way you think. There are so ma...Exactly, I like the way you think. There are so many perspectives.Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-22026594279986307452013-05-23T23:15:33.943-07:002013-05-23T23:15:33.943-07:00I think the opposite.
But see, they are not withe...I think the opposite. <br />But see, they are not withering and dying, they are withering and drying. Sustaining themselves. Dying her, is shedding it's petals, gone.Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-5825463395463550402013-05-23T23:14:05.062-07:002013-05-23T23:14:05.062-07:00Thank you so much, Ghadeer!
I agree, there are t...Thank you so much, Ghadeer! <br /><br />I agree, there are things that we'll never know, and there are things that we'll know without their reasons. It is fascinating.Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-34346660036012619722013-05-23T23:13:08.259-07:002013-05-23T23:13:08.259-07:00I think we are destructive and that's our grea...I think we are destructive and that's our greatest loss. We tend to find the bad in the good, the sorrow in our happiness. We are always greedy for more, never satisfied.Mominahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14784732240852124082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-66195387355444571262013-05-22T22:00:56.817-07:002013-05-22T22:00:56.817-07:00Intriguing thought process i must say :)
And i to...Intriguing thought process i must say :) <br />And i totally agree with your lines talking about forced death.After i have read this i may go out and watch the roses in my garden wither :)Alcinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18359846306902469801noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-4288160999850118612013-05-22T21:12:35.375-07:002013-05-22T21:12:35.375-07:00Different from the usual topic, amazing imagery an...Different from the usual topic, amazing imagery and best execution. I loved the way you described the unusual imaginations in a very different way. Wonderful!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04581068327366627346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-65569078309134618042013-05-21T02:31:39.601-07:002013-05-21T02:31:39.601-07:00Sometimes the best stories are the ones that never...Sometimes the best stories are the ones that never do find an ending.Arcanehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00481610801908373096noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-60082730260893484182013-05-18T12:17:53.544-07:002013-05-18T12:17:53.544-07:00Momina its only you who can make a pressed and wil...Momina its only you who can make a pressed and wilted flower look so beautiful!Privy Trifleshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05317530852098436444noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-83170133875434105332013-05-18T10:23:05.265-07:002013-05-18T10:23:05.265-07:00O_O
Do you know that you have just unveiled what ...O_O <br />Do you know that you have just unveiled what I EXACTLY feel about roses? <br />And I DO have this thing about withered roses nd I hate them between the book pages. <br />I collect petals, they wither and I just look at them. Sometimes I feel they deserve to be heard and given importance more than the fully blossomed one. Everyone loves those, rarely people pay importance to withered one just like everyone can tell a person is happy but rarely people see/feel someone in pain. <br />Excellent one Momina!Ph_https://www.blogger.com/profile/08057387087425836378noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-8569194765449807842013-05-18T06:30:26.815-07:002013-05-18T06:30:26.815-07:00You can never say what stories they hold, but we c...You can never say what stories they hold, but we can well imagine. Perhaps that's how our mind works at times !!!Amrit Sinhahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08333443172096537424noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-20161518356109055682013-05-18T02:44:59.170-07:002013-05-18T02:44:59.170-07:00By pressing them against a book they don't wit...By pressing them against a book they don't wither and die though, and retain some of that beauty. I think if they are withering and dying then that is actually a complete story. Markhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12118816573712396453noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-74492216890475610672013-05-18T00:03:43.070-07:002013-05-18T00:03:43.070-07:00Your words are so pretty.
I think the whole univ...Your words are so pretty. <br /><br />I think the whole universe and everything in it is so fascinating because it all hides secrets and unfinished tales.Ghadeerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04811397676327530873noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6140769914871453026.post-52577662923915902013-05-17T23:35:27.313-07:002013-05-17T23:35:27.313-07:00Probably because everything with a lost self holds...Probably because everything with a lost self holds the most attention from us. Nothing that is living, gives us that much of a pleasure to cherish from. <br />Are we lacking something or are we that destructive, remains unquestioned.The Purple Assassin.https://www.blogger.com/profile/15095965913335974493noreply@blogger.com