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She stands still in the center of the park, staring
somewhere in the distance, unaware of the way people eye her. Half wet hair,
blowing in the breeze, the length of her scarf flapping around her neck. Yet,
her gaze is intent, unhindered; settled on the single fluffy cloud that adorns
the sky, so lost in its beauty that she cannot see the setting that hold my equally
committed contemplation. My view is completely different but similarly
beautiful. Our unwavering gazes settled upon the sole scenery that connects us.
The only difference is that I am the sun, peeking from behind those very
clouds.
-Momina.
perspective. Looove it!
ReplyDeleteYes! Thank you, Joy, haven't seen you around lately.
DeleteI have not been around :((( But i will catch up with you soon!
DeleteLovely!
ReplyDeleteThank you, Maryam! :)
DeleteWow ... your last line is beautiful !!!
ReplyDelete"Our unwavering gazes settled upon the sole scenery that connects us. The only difference is that I am the sun, peeking from behind those very clouds."
ReplyDeleteNothing was ever spoken better in two sentences than this.
You've grabbed my attention. Exquisite!
I am glad you liked it! Thank you, Heera. :)
DeleteAmazing!! Love the last line <3
ReplyDeleteThanks Anam! xx
DeleteThose eyes had a lot more to say.
ReplyDeleteRegardless, a lot was said without being spoken.
DeleteThis is so beautifully done! Your writings are amazing!
ReplyDeleteI am honored that you feel so, Raajii.
DeleteWow.. the last line made me fall in love with your words again and again ! :) Amazing! :)
ReplyDeleteHahah awww, thank you so much! Always a pleasure to know what you think! :)
DeleteLoved loved loved this one......such a beautiful description, amazingly penned!
ReplyDeleteThank you, glad you loved it! :)
DeleteMomina, your words never fail to make me fall in love with them.
ReplyDeleteI am flattered. Thank you!
DeleteMagical words! :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Aqsa, this means a lot.
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